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Old 09-13-2017, 11:43 AM   #1
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Loving terms of endearment
Embraces held back in contempt
Left chained to an old stark fence
My spirit’s broken and emotions whipped

The unsightly stray mongrel
The world constantly kicks to the side
Lost, confused and taunted
A muted howl echoing a wounded cry

My mind’s a dismantled cradle
My heart’s an unsung lullaby
Full of their many broken promises
Festering scars from their little harmless lies

I sought out refuge
Searching grand canyons and blue sky
Regretting the day of my whelping
cursing having ever embarked on this life

My tears now potent
Falling like methane rain
A biitch now forever impounded
I'm unwanted and unclaimed
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Old 09-13-2017, 12:34 PM   #2
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Wow. Absolutely haunting.
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Old 09-13-2017, 02:23 PM   #3
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Old 09-13-2017, 03:00 PM   #4
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Old 09-15-2017, 05:27 AM   #5
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That is amazing. There is so much emotion you can feel reading it.
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Old 12-06-2017, 08:18 AM   #7
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My mind is a dismantled cradle, wrapping my head around that one...
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