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Unread 12-10-2004, 10:46 AM   #1
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Default Seroquel Dreams **Trigger** **Naughty words maybe too**

Well i always heard crazy people are more creative and ive never felt more crazy in my life than i did when i wrote this.

Seroquel Dreams

Seroquel dreams promises me peace ever more
Wondering what the hell i am still here for

I can no longer deal with the pain
Of my crazy self hating brain

Sixty pills down my throat
Releif settles in as my mind starts to float

Time goes by and my head starts to bake
Something feels wrong, Something seems fake

I wake up my girlfriend and she gives me a stare
Thats when i tell her of this crazy nightmare

Stumbling to the car i fall on concrete
Waking up in the hospital, oh such a treat

Tubes in my lungs, penis and tummy
When they removed them, to put it lightly, it sure felt crummy

What is my point, could i give you a clue?
Im just telling the story of how my seroquel dreams became charcoal poo

Obviously im no poet, i just figured id try cause i was bored in the hospital.
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Unread 12-12-2004, 12:56 AM   #2
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shaymus i hope on day you dont hate yourself... i wish i had the guts to do what you did.... maybe thats a curse maybe thats blessing i dont know... i hope you feel better and hope you talk to me when you have a problem.. im usually on after 9:20pm. I hate to wake up and not see your name online. As i allways do i give you a hug on line... hope you feel it..
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That was heartfelt, but I have to admit the last line really made me laugh. I guess I never really got over the whole bathroom humour stage of life. I still laugh when my brother makes armpit noises, so maybe it never really goes away.
That must have been a really frightening experience. It's good that you can express your self creatively here. I'm glad you're still with us.
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"What is my point, could i give you a clue?
Im just telling the story of how my seroquel dreams became charcoal poo"

That alone is BRILLIANT rhyming.

Shaymus, we don't have to talk about gods and religions to figure there must be a reason why you did not die.
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That was HUGE, Shaymus. I take it you aren't ready to join the Dead Poets Society either? Good. Then we shall expect more of this sort of thing from you. Carry on.

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